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  • I need a logo Feedback especially from girls, but boys can critique too.

    Please tell me if:
    Are you felling that you want to have your hair cut now seeing this logo; by the way I think I need one too, I've been away from scissors from two months. The letters are the owner initials. I really hope you like the curly hair effect with the letters…

    Thanks in advance...

    ikyut
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  • #2
    not digging this at all.

    is that a W and an A?
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    • #3
      For this design I would have to say it's got it's good and bad points. I like how it flows, and that you're going for more of an elegant / scripted style. At the same time it's a bit too busy for the eye. You can tell what everything is but it's a bit hard to keep your focus on it too long. Scripted typogaphy is always tough since it can get too busy really quick.

      I think you're on the right track, but at this point it seems to have a bit too much but at the same time, as odd as this may sound, it seemes to be missing something. I really can't put my finger on it. I'll keep lookin' at it and get back to you if I come up with some better suggestions.
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      • #4
        Ok chriscrooz, thats the feedback I needed, thanks a lot. i think I will start another option of that logo, try to avoid old fashioned font.

        Defjoe you are right too it´s a W and A, great skills, thanks Ja.

        See ya. ikyut...
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