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    well i've hit that wall where i can't even think so any help would be great.
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  • #2
    hmmmm, I'm thinking palm frond, not piano. I like the colors. I like the fonts in #1 and #3. Think I like #3 best as it looks the least like a palm frond.
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    • #3
      agreed about the palm frond. Piano keys are always set up like this:



      notice how the black keys are set up - 2 together, then 3. I think that might make your logo more piano-y and less frond-y.

      I like the colors and style a lot though! And I like the font from #2 the best.
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      • #4
        Very cool! I like #3 the best...if you re-work the piano keys a bit I think you'll be on your way.

        Nice job on these...very simple and clean.
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        • #5
          yeah I didn't see the keys either.
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          • #6
            i like #5 the best, but without those lines going through "cabaret"... i also agree that they don't look like keys.
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            • #7
              I like #4 as well and maybe #3 with a different font, I see the keys clearly perhaps because right when i read piano i think keys.....perhaps you can define them more?

              Other than that I like the concept.

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              • #8
                #4 has my pick, the drop shadows offset makes it look a little blurry to me, I might pull it in a little bit tighter so there wasn't that white space between the font and the shadow. Looks sharp though.
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                • #9
                  thanks everyone. i'll play with the keys a bit & let you know what they choose. do you think this is to many to show? how many variations do you nomally show?
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                  • #10
                    usually 3.
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                    • #11
                      I agree with the rest...the keys could use a bit of a tweaking, but as far as fonts go, I dig #1 and #2. Great look and feel! Very classy.

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                      • #12


                        ok i doctored the keys up to look more key-y & i cut the choices to 4.

                        what cha think now?
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                        • #13
                          I like the way the keys and the words fit together in number 4. It's still kind of hard to see the thin grey lines on the keys, though.
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                          • #14
                            Nice job! Concept #2 makes me think piano now. I wonder if beefing up the black lines slightly more would have a bit more impact, but overall, nicely done.

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                            • #15
                              I can see the keys now! Nice imporvement

                              I think that #2 works the best.
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