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    Direct mailing postcard, which one looks better? Any ideas?
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  • #2
    #2 made me laugh! I would go with #2!

    Simple, clean and down right funny!! Only thing I would do is make the text flush right since its just slightly off - other than that...go to town! Funny stuff!!

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    • #3
      No 2 def, for two reasons. the first card has all kap type, and shallow leading, it makes me loose my place every other word, but the picture is really cool. and the second one is really great, i love the concept and follow through. still not sure on the type though, could swing either way. hope that helps
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      • #4
        Yeah, Im open to the fonts and placement but those are my two ideas for the whole "left out" idea. Any suggestions on fonts?

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        • #5
          These are going to be sent out to hotels, inns, B&B's etc..so not sure would give a better feel.

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          • #6
            Oh man I was laughin' my head off when I say the second Image.. NUMBER 2 is the way to go!!! Great pic..
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            • #7
              Some feedback I got says that the bears really don't realy the message of hotel reservations very well. I was thinking of some other ideas, how about a row of doors all but one have occupied signs on them. Same message.

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              • #8
                Go for it I love concepts cause it's being creative in more then a visual sense. I did an add campaig here and had so much fun with the concepts. Man that is great.

                I like the gummy bears idea it's too funny.

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                • #9
                  No contest when gummies are involved.

                  #2 all day. I would probably adjust the levels a hint, get a more rich color from those delicious snackables, other than that I would run with it my friend.

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                  • #10
                    no.2 Very clever. I would change the font maybe and try fix the justification like DZ said.

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                    • #11
                      Number Two for sure. When I first saw number one I thought It was going to be an ad for depression, or genital warts.

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                      • #12
                        I like no.2 as well, maybe have all the red gummys with their backs to the yellow gummy. Although I am guessing that your photo subjects have mysteriously disappeared.
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                        • #13
                          2, 2 & 2
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                          • #14
                            #2 is awesome, the way gummy bears slouch is great.
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