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  • Kayekaye
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    Try a thin rule circle for the sun inside the diamond like sun points. Would have to be heavier the smaller it went. But currently I find very few black only demands for logos like yours. You can always...
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    There is way too much going on. Think about that logo the size it needs to be on a business card. Will you still be able to make out all the different elements? Simplify, simplify, simplify.
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    We are telling you what needs to be done to fix the problem. Unfortunately it's not as simple as "this wire has come loose" or "replace the motor".

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    http://www.freewebs.com/sailedship/T...PHASSAILED.htm

    Does this website have potential? be honest.
    http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y23...er/gilmore.gif

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    Not without content.

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    • #3
      what does that even mean... no offense but, i hate open ended questions of that sorts... nothing against you.

      Anyway your typography needs work... i can't even read what it says. This is due to the size and type face you have chosen. Get a more clear font and make it larger.

      What do you mean by does it have potential?... it lacks a whole layout scheme. There really is nothing more i comment on about your site unless you gpresent a layout design of some manor,shape or form.

      Furthermore, who is it for and what audience are you trying to addressing?

      The best way to go about a website design is to fully predesign the site layout before even touching the actual technical application. This way you have a clear understanding of what needs to happen and your not just winging it and hoping to god your site turns out aesthetically pleasing.

      design and technical application stand somewhat seperate.

      First deal with the design then deal with the technnical application.

      In the end this will make for a much more successfull website then so prior.

      - break it up into steps... don't just rush in and hope.
      Last edited by tZ; 05-21-2005, 08:02 PM.

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      • #4
        After the splash page there is nothing there.
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        • #5
          Originally posted by tZ
          what does that even mean... no offense but, i hate open ended questions of that sorts... nothing against you.

          Anyway your typography needs work... i can't even read what it says. This is due to the size and type face you have chosen. Get a more clear font and make it larger.

          What do you mean by does it have potential?... it lacks a whole layout scheme. There really is nothing more i comment on about your site unless you gpresent a layout design of some manor,shape or form.

          Furthermore, who is it for and what audience are you trying to addressing?

          The best way to go about a website design is to fully predesign the site layout before even touching the actual technical application. This way you have a clear understanding of what needs to happen and your not just winging it and hoping to god your site turns out aesthetically pleasing.

          design and technical application stand somewhat seperate.

          First deal with the design then deal with the technnical application.

          In the end this will make for a much more successfull website then so prior.

          - break it up into steps... don't just rush in and hope.

          My prior statement made no sense. I should have just asked if the opening banner was any good. Because as you can see there is absolutely nothing on the site.
          http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y23...er/gilmore.gif

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