Right, I've fixed the text block lining up with the 'r' (I noticed that as soon as I posted it!) I've also adjusted the kerning, and made the cross lines of the t and f line up with the x height on the r.
My reason for doing a cover page is partly to show off some more artistic work to compliment the corporate work that I've got inside.
"Far better is it to dare mighty things, to win glorious triumphs, even though checkered by failure, than to rank with those poor spirits who neither enjoy much nor suffer much, because they live in the gray twilight that knows not victory nor defeat."
-- Theodore Roosevelt
RBlack205, I've never seen your work, so I can't make any judgments about your professional prospects in that regard. As everyone else has said, though, rejection is just part of the game. Those of us...