compositionally speaking i would like to see something done with the upper portain of the design. Minute definition of a seascape,cityscape or something of that nature would enhance the composition immensly.
The composition just feels like something is missing and needs to be there. Other then that is looking splendid.
Perhaps create a triangular eye movement. You could do this via adding the city scape and having one window in a distance be on. Have it placed above and inbetween the two faces. You could also place it half way above the girls head and top of the page and a bit off centered in relationships to the girls head width. - just a suggestion.
compositionally speaking i would like to see something done with the upper portain of the design. Minute definition of a seascape,cityscape or something of that nature would enhance the composition immensly.
The composition just feels like something is missing and needs to be there. Other then that is looking splendid.
Perhaps create a triangular eye movement. You could do this via adding the city scape and having one window in a distance be on. Have it placed above and inbetween the two faces. You could also place it half way above the girls head and top of the page and a bit off centered in relationships to the girls head width. - just a suggestion.
compositionally speaking i would like to see something done with the upper portain of the design. Minute definition of a seascape,cityscape or something of that nature would enhance the composition immensly.
The composition just feels like something is missing and needs to be there. Other then that is looking splendid.
Perhaps create a triangular eye movement. You could do this via adding the city scape and having one window in a distance be on. Have it placed above and inbetween the two faces. You could also place it half way above the girls head and top of the page and a bit off centered in relationships to the girls head width. - just a suggestion.
Damn, tZ. Where the hell do you come up with a suggestion to everything. Thanks, again...
Hey, I replied to a sticky.. er, is that okay? It said the topic was closed after I posted my reply.. but for some reason my reply still went through.. I hope that's okay, if not feel free to delete my...
You might be able to trademark the tagline: "missing something?" as it applies to copywriting, but the whole design would be a copyright and I think you'd have a tough time getting one. If you...
Thanks for the feedback tradebishop! The 'Graphic | Web | Design' thing is supposed to be a simple tag line under my name, so that people will know what I offer at a glance.
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