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LavaMan · 07-05-2005, 03:14 PM

1.) I like how you had product shots of that book to give the viewer a clearer idea of what the first 5 pages were.

2.) The Fuse pages... I'm seeing a grey background...maybe the PDF or something but I would stick with white you did on the rest of the pages and maybe draw some background design, put some of those colour ribbons or frame the screen captures to tie them together a little more (looks like some trippy iPod commercial.)

Good work!

stevo · 07-05-2005, 03:19 PM

cheers - appreciated. Ill sort the fuse pages tonight

stevo · 07-20-2005, 01:43 PM

Originally posted by LavaMan

1.) I like how you had product shots of that book to give the viewer a clearer idea of what the first 5 pages were.

2.) The Fuse pages... I'm seeing a grey background...maybe the PDF or something but I would stick with white you did on the rest of the pages and maybe draw some background design, put some of those colour ribbons or frame the screen captures to tie them together a little more (looks like some trippy iPod commercial.)

Good work!

here is my edited folio, what you reckon?

http://www.savefile.com/files/7581837

EDIT: handy if you had the link!

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