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    Just would like some feedback on a few drawings I've made. The book I'm doing them for is German, so I can't really provide any specific context, but the story is about a fictional Persian Empire devolving into decadence.

    http://imgur.com/a/VBQo2

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    Hi majulan and welcome to GDF.

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      Nice line work majulan. I like them! I too have to do some book illustrations soon too.

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        • #5
          The last illustration with the guy on the mast is suggestive and feature irrelevant stuff too strongly. I recommend a different pose so it doesn't look like his rocking a massive boner and to mute down the rope ladder thing his hanging on to, those things doesn't seem important.

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          • PrintDriver
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            Wow. I see a sailor on a bowsprit ...
            Besides, out of context, how do you know this isn't an intentional exaggeration for a story about an empire ''devolving into decadence?'' and that the rope ladder isn't somehow mentioned in the text as being important?

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