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    HI I'm taking UI challenge and try to make a landing page.
    I was given a feedback it's not polished enough but didn't say why.

    Can you please have a look and kindly advise what's wrong?!

    UI-Challenge-003-Landing-Page-Water-Mission

    https://www.behance.net/gallery/4127...-Water-Mission

    You can also check out my other projects on Behance.
    https://www.behance.net/zansum
    All comments are welcomed!

    Thank you very much in advanced!
    Last edited by KitchWitch; 08-02-2016, 11:30 AM. Reason: fixed link

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    Hi Zans and welcome to GDF.

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    • #3
      Great work! If possible, you may amend the font color in the Contact Us form such as Name, Email and Message to light grey.

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      • #4
        I think in Banner you can add some slides to it. One thing which I liked the most is the page division. One last suggestion would be to change the Font style, and to add contact details like your contact number or email id.
        https://www.behance.net/ohdesignstudio

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        • #5
          I try to keep things super simple in terms of web design. That is just me.

          It looks nice for a person reading a Vatican-Roman scroll ( with there fingers ) and I am sure the webpage looks nice on a 3000X3000 high-resolution desktop.

          How much would a client pay you for this work in your opinion?

          .................................................. ..


          It is like a television commercial. Is this is how all websites are nowadays? Mind bending commercials. If that is what you wanted to create you have succeeded.

          It looks like every other website created via ( dream-weaver ) or whatever they call it nowadays. I can see the point and understand the navigation ( fingers ).

          .............

          I had to load it via my mobile device ( phone ). I assume this is a big picture ( example ) and not the actual page itself.

          Great work in comparison to my set of webpage examples.

          ..............

          Actually you have inspired me to include a "landing page" with my future ventures.
          Last edited by DanArt; 11-11-2016, 05:58 AM.

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