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    I met Benjamin Kessler yesterday at a digital design forum at Galapagos Art Space.

    He encouraged me to join and said that I could get critiques regarding my site, and even some freelance work, so here goes:

    www.newartwon.com

    Thanks,

    Michael

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    Welcome to GDF, newbloom! Ben gives good advice!


    Please have a look at these important threads posted here. They will explain a lot about how the forum runs, from the rules and regulations to frequently discussed topics to the background on some of our lingo and inside jokes.

    I'm a print guy, not a Web guy, but FWIW I like your splash. I hope you enjoy GDF!
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    "I put my heart and my soul into my work, and have lost my mind in the process."

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      Michael, great to see you! I'm so glad you've joined. As the day goes on, I'm sure more people will weigh in on your site.

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