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    I'm fully aware that the first logo is black and white, I was commenting on how difficult it is to read at any distance other than on top of it.

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    In the first link, the very first logo is B&W. I think the one with your initials are stronger, but definitely needs some work and tightening up.

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  • W.I.P - DJ Murph

    Hey guys i've got a website i'm creating here and could use some critique
    300+ layers
    No filters, No Styles
    Adobe Photoshop cs4
    Wacom Intuos4 medium tablet
    Wacom enthusiast, currently own the Intuos4 medium tablet, will own the Cintiq 21UX in 2 months.

  • #2
    Just some parts need a bit of reflow text wise.

    Example: On the second paragraph at the bottom it reads

    .................................................. .................work alongside such local
    Dj's as:

    Dj Paul Wellington
    Dj so and so and so
    To me that looks reads as

    Dj's as

    Dj Paul Wellington


    as if he Dj's under another name.


    Basically what I'm saying is watch your widow and orphans in the text.

    Don't let a single word sit on a line by itself.



    The site looks good and clean. It's going well so far.

    The only other thing that threw me was the 2 photos floating in the middle there.

    Could do with more photos, or just take them out. I'm not sure.

    "May your hats fly as high as your dreams"Michael Scott

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    • #3
      ooooo shiny!

      "There's something about turning the pages of a book or magazine and the felling of rubbing your hands across the words."

      This is my pen tool. There are many like it, but this one is MINE. My pen tool is my best friend. It is my life. I must master it as I must master my life. My pen tool without me is useless. Without my pen tool, I am useless.

      there is no grey area when it comes to 1 color logos.

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      • #4
        I like the neony look of it. (I know that's not a word, its just what came to mind).
        “The significant problems we face cannot be solved at the same level we created them.” Albert Einstein

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        • #5
          Just looking at this again.

          I do like it. Anytime I like something I step away for a while and come back and go "ooh I still like it" or "not as good as I first thought".

          This got an "ooh".

          "May your hats fly as high as your dreams"Michael Scott

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          • #6
            Looks groovy.

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            • #7
              Originally posted by eugenetyson View Post
              Just some parts need a bit of reflow text wise.

              Example: On the second paragraph at the bottom it reads


              To me that looks reads as

              Dj's as

              Dj Paul Wellington


              as if he Dj's under another name.


              Basically what I'm saying is watch your widow and orphans in the text.

              Don't let a single word sit on a line by itself.



              The site looks good and clean. It's going well so far.

              The only other thing that threw me was the 2 photos floating in the middle there.

              Could do with more photos, or just take them out. I'm not sure.

              I've taken the photos out, i'm just looking for a filler now that doesnt throw off the website; as for the content it's all just filler content and isn't the release content the typography is not how I plan to have it in the end.

              thanks for the feed back guys, great responses.
              Wacom enthusiast, currently own the Intuos4 medium tablet, will own the Cintiq 21UX in 2 months.

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