W.I.P - DJ Murph

hank_scorpio · 10-13-2009, 02:10 PM

Just some parts need a bit of reflow text wise.

Example: On the second paragraph at the bottom it reads

.................................................. .................work alongside such local
Dj's as:

Dj Paul Wellington
Dj so and so and so

To me that looks reads as

Dj's as

Dj Paul Wellington

as if he Dj's under another name.

Basically what I'm saying is watch your widow and orphans in the text.

Don't let a single word sit on a line by itself.

The site looks good and clean. It's going well so far.

The only other thing that threw me was the 2 photos floating in the middle there.

Could do with more photos, or just take them out. I'm not sure.

**Typically** · 10-13-2009, 03:34 PM

ooooo shiny!

Brie · 10-13-2009, 03:42 PM

I like the neony look of it. (I know that's not a word, its just what came to mind).

hank_scorpio · 10-13-2009, 03:44 PM

Just looking at this again.

I do like it. Anytime I like something I step away for a while and come back and go "ooh I still like it" or "not as good as I first thought".

This got an "ooh".

sierng · 10-13-2009, 03:53 PM

Looks groovy.

PhilDesigns · 10-13-2009, 05:50 PM

Originally posted by eugenetyson View Post

Just some parts need a bit of reflow text wise.

Example: On the second paragraph at the bottom it reads

To me that looks reads as

Dj's as

Dj Paul Wellington

as if he Dj's under another name.

Basically what I'm saying is watch your widow and orphans in the text.

Don't let a single word sit on a line by itself.

The site looks good and clean. It's going well so far.

The only other thing that threw me was the 2 photos floating in the middle there.

Could do with more photos, or just take them out. I'm not sure.

I've taken the photos out, i'm just looking for a filler now that doesnt throw off the website; as for the content it's all just filler content and isn't the release content the typography is not how I plan to have it in the end.

thanks for the feed back guys, great responses.

W.I.P - DJ Murph

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