Logo crossroad - critique appreciated

[Northern Lad]

Thanks Kion and Sketcher.

KemingMatters, the rough outlines are unfinished and at this stage I do not have other concepts to show. I had not seen the HP coming, but now that you have mentioned it, then it is obvious. Thanks. I have to come up with something to downplay that.

The logo is for a foundation.
/NL

[tom55]

I would like to add something quickly, OP did you do this in photoshop becaue the artowrk is not smooth to say the least, the edges could be silk smooth in illustrator.

[Northern Lad]

Hi Tom, I use Inkscape, but convertin to .gif makes the pixelation.
/NL

[woodwardo]

I would make the F a little more like an F - by that I mean extend the top more to the right if that makes any sense. It's hard to see what you're going for here, but maybe (hopefully) with colors, stroke weights, shading etc. it can further define a F and P - which I think it needs.

Also for what it's worth, I like the second one better, but again, neither letters are looking like the letters they're meant to be and if you hadn't told me what they were I might not have figured it out.

[Northern Lad]

Thanks Woodwardo, Mentally I can picture what you mean. Will see what I can make of it without creating too much un-balance.
/NL