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04-16-2005, 09:07 PM
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Somniferous Eye Mod
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: Florida
Posts: 4,291
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Plumbing Logo (Updated)
what do you guys think of these comps? any suggestions?
Last edited by Silence04; 05-02-2005 at 01:55 AM..
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04-16-2005, 10:30 PM
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#2
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Vote 'Love & Peace'
Join Date: Aug 2004
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I like the 6th and 3rd. The perspective of the 'Commercial & Residential' and 'Services of Florida' really doesn't work though. Then again, I like the wrench too ... decisions decisions ...
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04-16-2005, 11:44 PM
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#3
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Little Green Designer
Join Date: Apr 2003
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Nice! I like #3 and #6, they have awesome dynamics!
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04-17-2005, 01:13 AM
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#4
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GO AWAY!
Join Date: Jan 2005
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I think 3 is my favorite absolutely phenomenal work BTW - but will they ever want to get the logo printed on shirts?
I also agree with Ulysses about the 'services of Florida' being too much text.
when it comes to certain clients, remind yourself:
You can lead a horse to water, but you can't make him drink.
I'm an ARTIST, not a MAGICIAN!
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04-17-2005, 01:43 AM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Feb 2005
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3 obviously jumps out, but will it work in black and white? I also like what you were going for in 4 & 5, but I think you can agree that it just doesn't work in its current form. I'm betting the client picks 1 ..or 3 if they're are more adventurous.
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04-17-2005, 07:41 AM
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#6
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I belong somewhere else
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Savannah, GA
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I agree on 3 and 6 - but 3 is my favorite!!
Nice work as always Silence!
'No more yanky my wanky! The donga need food!!' - heh
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04-17-2005, 12:35 PM
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#7
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Alone with Everybody
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Argentina
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Number 3 Silence, no doubt... great work, I would like a version with the Accura.. plum.. on blue solid like the others.
See you
This is my space ship...and my galaxy.
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04-17-2005, 03:44 PM
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#8
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2004
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Number 3 reminds me something i've seen on adverts here in the uK, with the target and that font... Hmmmm, i can't think what it is, some sort of washing powder maybe!?!
I'm gonna break the mold, because my fav of the bunch is #2.
http://dabeanz.deviantart.com
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04-18-2005, 06:26 AM
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#9
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Somniferous Eye Mod
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: Florida
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thanks for your opinions guys! i can't take out the 'service of florida', needed that for copywrite.
the client likes number 1 so far. too bad cause i like number 3 the best.
there will me more to come i think.
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04-18-2005, 12:44 PM
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Alone with Everybody
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Argentina
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Oh.. # 1 means archery for me, things that happend with clients 
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