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Old 11-03-2009, 04:30 PM   #21
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Yes. Try a different, more substantial typeface.

Above the antlers is a good suggestion.
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Old 11-03-2009, 10:43 PM   #22
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I would go wild with the antlers. Right now it looks very.. electronic.

The last one looks more like an old-fashioned gas pump to me.
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Old 11-03-2009, 11:04 PM   #23
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How about an angle like this? Good burgers by the way!
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