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Old 02-19-2012, 07:49 PM   #1
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logo for consortium of libraries

logo for consortium of libraries ..unite their books for the people .
the three lines form three triangles, but Rapresent also the books are viewed in profile .





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Old 02-19-2012, 07:54 PM   #2
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Stop.

Slow down.

Spend more than 5 minutes on a concept when developing it.
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Old 02-19-2012, 08:15 PM   #3
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Golden Triangle is the name ..This image represents this ,
Moreover the eye is the knowledge and reading, also the union of these libraries .

The second left is what I prefer, with the golden triangle full
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Old 02-19-2012, 09:22 PM   #4
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And you get paid to do this?
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Old 02-19-2012, 09:36 PM   #5
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Do you even know what the Golden Triangle means in the name???
Do you find these things in contests somewhere?
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Old 02-20-2012, 12:08 AM   #6
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What good will it be for us to critique it? Every time you get a critique you ignore what everyone says.

Just do whatever you want.
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Old 02-20-2012, 12:49 AM   #7
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Honestly, the more posts I read of Creare's, the more I feel I'm being "Punk'd".

Exhibit A: His avatar
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Old 02-20-2012, 12:51 AM   #8
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I don't understand the message that you are trying to convey :/ The whole triangle and eye aspect reminds me of the symbols used by the "illuminati".
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Old 02-20-2012, 05:38 AM   #9
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On the 2nd one try making the eye smaller. It's crowded in there. Line up the words golden triangle with the apex of the triangle in the same way Regional Library is. Make it even. Can you give a little more breathing room to Golden Triangle Regional Library?
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Old 02-20-2012, 08:00 AM   #10
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Is this just to prove me right with what I said in your last thread?
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