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Old 11-26-2012, 06:08 PM   #31
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i prefer the heart background. the circles are too close together imo. i love brown and pink combos, but that brown is a bit warm. very nice overall! congratulations!
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Old 11-26-2012, 06:48 PM   #32
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Yeah I think I might move the circles further apart, like the hearts are set up.
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Old 11-26-2012, 09:52 PM   #33
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I like the top left one the best. And I do love the circles for the background Very sweet!
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Old 11-30-2012, 07:34 PM   #34
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hello everyone...an update to this piece.

After reading everyone's comments here I decided to ask my wife her thoughts. That helped narrow the focus down some more.
so, I came up with this design.

I added in the snowflakes and not sure I like their positioning...i feel it worked best covering the darker circles. I was going to replace some circles with snowflakes but another designer here said they look best on the dark spots.

Thoughts on this so far...and BTW, this is smaller than originally planned. It is now 2.75" (rather than 4") I didn't realize candles with metal lids in that larger size would be $10-20 each...the smaller candles are $2-3 each so I can buy more candles for less buck.



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Old 12-01-2012, 02:30 AM   #35
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OMG Love it!!!
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