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Old 01-08-2013, 09:41 AM   #11
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Waaaay too close to the Facebook logo, particularly with that color.
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Old 01-08-2013, 11:59 PM   #12
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Thanks for the feedback guys! I've been working on some different ideas. Which one of these do you think i should focus on? ....or should i just stay with the current logo (the last one on this post) and move on to bigger problems? haha
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Old 01-09-2013, 12:03 AM   #13
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Forgot a couple more!
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Old 01-09-2013, 03:56 AM   #14
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I really like the fourth one in post 12. The way the letters overlap each other in some spots is gorgeous. You'll need to work a little more on readibilty, but the concept is really good. Also, I would be tempted to try another version where the whole word appears to be written with one ribbon.
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Old 01-09-2013, 04:57 AM   #15
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I really like the fourth one in post 12. The way the letters overlap each other in some spots is gorgeous. You'll need to work a little more on readibilty, but the concept is really good. Also, I would be tempted to try another version where the whole word appears to be written with one ribbon.
Thanks for your feedback Buda! Yeah the only thing with that one is the legibility. I'll be playing around some more.
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Old 01-09-2013, 12:42 PM   #16
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careful with that f, it could be easily misconstrued as b and "web blow" sounds x rated.

I like the direction it is going, although the lack of tilt on the characters make it look a little too static.
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Old 01-09-2013, 06:09 PM   #17
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I like the #1 of post 12. I think #5 is venturing toward feminine hygene product-esque.
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Old 01-09-2013, 06:29 PM   #18
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I like the #1 of post 12. I think #5 is venturing toward feminine hygene product-esque.
haha yeah that's what i'm afraid of. thanks for the feedback!
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