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Old 03-19-2004, 09:37 AM   #1
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some of my stuff




Well...in the short time I've been in this forum, I feel I might be at the right place.

Although reluctant (and shy), I'm gonna post some of my work here.

I'll start off with my 3D stuff, it's the facet of the computer graphics I seem to be most proficient in.

Image 1: My favorite beer.

Image 2: A prototype of a new medical instrument.

Image 3: A banner used in conventions displaying their virtual reality arcade game units.

Image 4: A work in progress--a rose.

Please comment/critique/suggest anything you'd like. I'd appreciate it.

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Old 03-19-2004, 11:37 AM   #2
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I like the guiness one, but you need to work on the glass more, the reflection from the table is way too much, tone it down and show more shadows and light in the glass itself, show the glass not the table i guess. The copier....eh its alright, looks very generic though, I would add some more detail. VR room....cant really tell what any of the machines actually are, but I like the lighting and the 3D work looks nice. Rose........looks very nice, would like to see it fully rendered in an actual garden instead of the wire landscape with gray default background.



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Old 03-19-2004, 02:20 PM   #3
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guiness one is brill!!
the rose one still needs more work on it to make it more realistic!! but its all fab!
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