Broshure

[lirankoren]

Need your opinions

[CkretAjint]

This goes in Showcase.

Also, I wouldn't call that a brochure. Since there is no brief attached I assume it is a postcard... Who's it for? What's the purpose of it? Who's the client? Since it's a "brochure" what is on the back side? Where does it fold, if so where? One fold? Two times?

[lirankoren]

Originally Posted by CkretAjint

This goes in Showcase.

Also, I wouldn't call that a brochure. Since there is no brief attached I assume it is a postcard... Who's it for? What's the purpose of it? Who's the client? Since it's a "brochure" what is on the back side? Where does it fold, if so where? One fold? Two times?

Sorry my english is so-so, I'm new to this forum, I was looking for a good international forum.

You are correct it's not a broshure it is an invatathion for an avent of a clothing company in my country.

My costomer is giving me a headeck, I think it'd done.
side 2 not done yet.

Hope you'll like it, be honest.
Thenks.

[dot]

i don't like it (sorry!). at best the colors are warm but sort of muddy.
the image doesn't do anything, doesn't say anything about what's going on. it doesn't have direction or movement or energy (all words for the same thing, i guess). the image is to me a generic cute hip young people fantasy image, with no bite or surprise or something to make it stand out.
on the other hand, i am not the audience that you are looking for, so take my critique with more skepticism than usual.

also, i do like the skin treatment on the girl on the left. i don't know why.

[Buda]

It is traditional to use photography to sell clothing. How about using photography for the clothing and illustrations of the models? This will makign the clothing stand out and will highlight the fact that this is a clothing company's advertising. Right now, nothing about this postcard says "Buy our clothes!"

[Bob]

Bro? Sure.

[Tea]

Originally Posted by Broacher

Bro? Sure.

Broa. CHER. (Thats the French version)

[lirankoren]

Thank you for your profational apinian, I liked the picture Idea.