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Old 04-25-2008, 10:46 AM   #1
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Construction company web design

Hi all,

Here is a new thing im working on for a general construction company.
I wold like to hear your ideas about it.

What ever you think about it, I want to hear it.

Thanks all,
Liran Koren
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Old 04-25-2008, 10:56 AM   #2
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Old 04-25-2008, 11:37 AM   #3
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OOOpssss

http://www.kirbigc.com/test1.html

Sory about it.
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Old 04-25-2008, 12:01 PM   #4
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I don't really like the puzzle pieces. Its ok as a concept but I think you've overused them here. I find it hard to focus on the text box with everything thats going on around it. Try it without having the links on the side inside puzzle pieces.
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Old 04-25-2008, 01:49 PM   #5
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Wink

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Think you've spelt "Kirby" wrong mate!
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Old 04-25-2008, 02:00 PM   #6
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I kind of like it. I think you have way to go before the design is finished but it's on the right path.
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Old 04-25-2008, 03:27 PM   #7
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Appriciat all your help, Working on that
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Old 04-25-2008, 03:33 PM   #8
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I don't know if I like the puzzle pieces kind of seems a bit childish. Conceptually it makes sense. Maybe it just needs to be developed more.
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Old 04-25-2008, 04:05 PM   #9
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Second try
http://www.kirbigc.com/test1.html
Is this batter?
I've tried to clean it up.
File hade been replaced on the server. whan done i'll apload all atages to the same link and leave it there.
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Old 04-25-2008, 04:51 PM   #10
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I rackommand speel chak befor clinet submishun.

This version is better, but still looks very flat. also, the lines in the crane lines, puzzle pieces, etc, have a lot of artifacts in them especially when they curve.

Can you find another construction guy as well? just mirroring the one you have looks a bit strange.
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