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Old 11-03-2009, 02:41 PM   #1
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Exclamation My Website "Not Finished"

I have not finished it yet because I am currently in my last year of my Graphic design degree.

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Old 11-03-2009, 08:34 PM   #2
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Hi there. Not much to crit at this stage...

Red and yellow...McDonalds?
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It looks quite nice. Whats the 09/10 signify? Also out of curiosity whats the v above the A in the logo about?
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Old 11-04-2009, 01:04 PM   #4
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It looks quite nice. Whats the 09/10 signify? Also out of curiosity whats the v above the A in the logo about?
The V above the A is for aesthetics... And the 09/10 is the year.
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Old 11-04-2009, 01:19 PM   #5
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Hi there. Not much to crit at this stage...

Red and yellow...McDonalds?
Bojangles, Wendys, Hardees, Pizza Hut, Dennys, Sonic... hard to tell who rips who off. But I guess they have a reason for that colour - it sells food, fast.
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Old 11-04-2009, 02:25 PM   #6
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it is a start. will you convert the About page to text or keep it as a graphic?

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Old 11-04-2009, 02:35 PM   #7
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it is a start. will you convert the About page to text or keep it as a graphic?

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i am going to change the links and about page to a description page. that is easy enough.
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The V above the A is for aesthetics... And the 09/10 is the year.
I don't get the 09/10 even with your explanation?
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I don't get the 09/10 even with your explanation?
2009/2010 semester. you must get that surely.
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Gotta say I don't think that is obvious... but perhaps it is that here in Canada semesters are considered, Fall 2009 or Winter 2010 or Summer 2010. We would never call it 09/10.
That would be a grade school year, not a college/uni semester.
At any rate... I think it is not obvious without an explanation.
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