my logo design work

cemhancem · 02-05-2010, 08:41 AM

Waiting for a comment to my logo design work

scratchmarc · 02-05-2010, 09:27 PM

it looks rather sad to me, i see the hanger as a frown.

stinkyboy · 02-05-2010, 09:33 PM

The kerning makes me a bit sad. D R YX

WannaBrie · 02-05-2010, 10:36 PM

I'm gonna take a wild guess here, this is for a dry cleaners? A little bit of info on the brief would help you get a good critique.

cemhancem · 02-06-2010, 06:51 AM

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Originally Posted by WannaBrie

I'm gonna take a wild guess here, this is for a dry cleaners? A little bit of info on the brief would help you get a good critique.

dry cleaning company

cemhancem · 02-06-2010, 06:52 AM

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Originally Posted by stinkyboy

The kerning makes me a bit sad. D R YX

yeah right

Keffs · 02-06-2010, 10:08 AM

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Originally Posted by cemhancem

yeah right

No, seriously. And the hanger looks sad too

What about making the ends of the hanger more like...ends of a hanger?

mojoprime · 02-06-2010, 03:08 PM

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Originally Posted by cemhancem

yeah right

no, he's right. the kerning is off. you need to fix that. also, the reverse and then the tag at the bottom both seem like afterthoughts, like you realized they needed to be int here but hadn't planned for them. so, it sort of feels as if you have a bunch disconnected objects and themes instead of a unified logo.

**garricks** · 02-06-2010, 03:33 PM

Everything but "DRYX" will be lost when you shrink this to a business card size.