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02-09-2010, 01:00 PM
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Help with this mural - have I got the angle right?
I don't know if it's because I haven't got good spacial awareness, I don't think I have, but I can't really work out what's wrong in this picture I'm making.
I know the perspective seems to be from down to up, so maybe my people I've placed in the scene, should I distort them a little?
Not sure what's going on with it but I know something perspective wise is amiss. Any comments greatly appreciated.
**not finished yet btw, I have lot more people and trees to add!
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02-09-2010, 01:06 PM
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I don't see the image.
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02-09-2010, 01:06 PM
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Sorry, trying top upload it now, can't remember my domains logon details
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02-09-2010, 01:13 PM
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02-09-2010, 01:16 PM
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so this is just a mock up and then you are going to paint this?
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02-09-2010, 01:17 PM
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No this is the design and it has to be printed out on vinyl. I amn't finished it yet though.
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02-09-2010, 01:26 PM
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I don't know where to begin to be honest.
The people are out of perspective and 'plonked on', the background is far too realistic to just drop a few 'fake' trees on the foreground (of varying complexity) and as for the psychedelic tree on the right ... is this supposed to carry a message or mean something?
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02-09-2010, 01:30 PM
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Yes, its for a university's Digital Media department. The concept is "grow" and each tree represents a different student's idea about what digital media is to them (I am incorporating 3D, animation, typography, programming eventually). The trees aren't supposed to look realistic. But I do want everything to be in perspective a looking like they fit.
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02-09-2010, 01:31 PM
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You can SOooooo tell the guy was sitting at a desk and you lobbed the lower half of his body off to make it appear as though he is laying on his stomach.
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02-09-2010, 01:31 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by CkretAjint
You can SOooooo tell the guy was sitting at a desk and you lobbed the lower half of his body off to make it appear as though he is laying on his stomach.
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Haha I know. I'm not actually using that guy, it's just to give me an idea of where to put people, what sizes to make them in perspective etc etc.
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