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Old 05-03-2005, 08:54 AM   #1
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Baby birth announcement card

Hi, here is my Baby birth announcement card 5x7inches design, i use simple layout, top is baby's name, right side is put birth date, birth time, weight, length,
so layout ok or not???
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Old 05-03-2005, 01:24 PM   #2
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they do birth annoucement cards?
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Old 05-03-2005, 01:34 PM   #3
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I think it's a neat idea, but I would use softer colors!! Layout looks ok!
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Old 05-03-2005, 01:53 PM   #4
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Do they also do death announcement cards too? and perhaps divorce announcement cards too? ooo ... the possibilities.
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Old 05-03-2005, 01:53 PM   #5
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Layout is cool, but like Kink said, softer colors would really help the piece and welcome to the forum! also, i'm not normally a fan of outer glow on text, but it gives it a really soft feel. good job, and carry on.
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