Feedback on Branding work for a family member

Hi there!

Quick Intro:

I’ve recently gotten back into graphic design after a long hiatus. I don’t have a formal education and I know I still have a lot to learn so this is my first attempt at re-learning some old skills while learning many new ones.

The Project:

My family member asked me to design a logo, some business cards, and a website for him. He owns a real estate development company which focuses on building high-end/luxury homes. We landed on the branding being intending to be “old money but feels modern” (hopefully that’s a strong enough descriptor, if not please let me know)

What I’m looking for:

I would love some constructive feedback on this project so far, it’s still in progress but I want to get my work out now to improve faster. I’d love to know what I should be working on, essential gaps in knowledge that you can see, or any sort of feedback you feel would help me improve.

Logo + a couple variations:

I’m not sure how much to describe my thought process but I’m assuming some explanation would be useful. Obviously it’s an H with the top part making the silhouette of a roof, then the bottom swoosh is meant to balance the logo while also making a D. I added the sweeping ends to indicate movement, make the logo feel alive, and balance the mark so it didn’t feel too vertical. I had many ideas for this logo but I kinda knew beforehand I wanted it to be a monogram, I just liked how the letters interacted with each other. The primary color being champagne-y is meant to compliment future print material which will include a copper/brass foil texture. The copper texture is related to the copper piping my family member likes to include in projects.

Business Card:

The real challenge here for me was learning to create a typographic hierarchy, I think it turned out okay but I’m here for critique so please let me know.

Website :

It’s just the landing page, I know its super bare bones right now but any feedback would be appreciated. hechtdevelopment .com Edit: Sorry if the website isn’t loading right now, I’m working on getting it back up.

Logo looks fine, the flourish at the bottom I’m not sure, looks like a ‘tail’ to me, and that is a bit strange. But I don’t think it’s a deal breaker.

The letter spacing on the large HECHT is off. For display text you need to control the tracking/kerning between the letters to ensure they are even, often switching between Metric/Optical or individually adjusting. Look at it upside down, usually tricks the brain into seeing it more clearly as the image will be reversed and the brain will see the spacing before it recognises letters.

The website looks fine. I’d just have an inquiry form on the website kinda front and centre and at the end of each page - or even a pop out contact form that is on each page.

Contacting is important and it should be easy. So many sites bury the information, or rely on someone sending an email. But a contact form directs the user to provide details, name, phone number, reason for contacting, etc.

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Same here I like the logo but the tails there something wrong, which way do you want to go ? left or right ?. You need to show the path of your company !, and show them what it is the right way !

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I think what’s bothering me is the tail for sure it kinda looks like AJ and the H is a bit lost.

I’d stick to the house idea and reduce our remove the lower flourish. Just so the H is prominent.

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Thank you so much for the feedback! This is exactly the type of response I was hoping for. I’ll make the adjustments and see how they look! Hopefully I’m not asking something that is overly broad but I’ve only been properly studying design for about a month now so I know there are huge gaps on my knowledge, is there something you’d recommend I focus on studying based on what you’ve seen?

Thank you! I’ll make some changes and see how it looks! I really like that you described how it’s hard to tell which direction the company is going that’s super helpful

Forgive me, I replied in early hours of morning the dog had me up and I hadn’t got my peepers on and wasn’t thinking 100% clearly…

I’ll get into the nitty gritty later.

If you’re only starting out, then you’re already way ahead from what I can see.

The biggest question I’d ask isn’t “how do I make better logos?” but “what does the client actually need?”

A lot of designers get caught up in making marks look clever, but the logo is usually the easy part. Understanding the business, the audience, the competition, how the company positions itself, and how customers find and contact them is where the real value is.

For example, with a luxury home developer I’d be asking questions like:

Who are their ideal clients? (Obviously wealthy people, but what areas? What types of people? Commuters? Work-from-home professionals? Retirees? Are they selling city-adjacent properties, lakeside homes, or country estates?)

Are they targeting private homeowners, investors, architects, or commercial clients?

What makes them different from other developers?

What does “old money but modern” actually mean to them?

Where will people first encounter the brand? Website, site signage, social media, brochures, business cards, estate agents, referrals?

The logo itself is heading in the right direction. The monogram concept is solid and I can see the thinking behind combining the H.

The technical side will come with practice.

I’d spend time studying typography, spacing, hierarchy, grids, layout, and composition. Those are the fundamentals you’ll use on every project regardless of style. Learning how letterforms interact and how spacing affects perception will improve your work faster than learning the latest logo trends.

I’d also spend some time learning colour theory and print production. It’s one of the areas many newer designers overlook because most work starts life on a screen.


THE NITTY GRITTY


One other area I’d recommend looking into is print production. A lot of designers focus on how something looks on screen, but eventually somebody has to manufacture it.

For example, this business card looks quite simple at first glance, but there is actually a lot going on behind the scenes.

A solid black card with metallic or gold text can look very premium, but it also introduces production considerations. Depending on the printing method, large solid backgrounds can be more difficult to keep consistent, metallic finishes can add cost, and reversed-out text requires more care to maintain legibility.

What many newer designers don’t realise is that every design decision has a knock-on effect further down the production chain.

A simple-looking card can become more expensive to print, more difficult to reproduce consistently, or more susceptible to issues such as registration shifts, colour variation, or readability problems.

You also have to think beyond the first print run.

What happens if the client needs another 5,000 cards in two years’ time from a different printer? What happens if they send the artwork to an online print service instead of the supplier you originally used? What happens if someone opens the file and starts changing colours because they think “black is black”?

Those are real-world situations that happen all the time.

One of the biggest lessons I learned working around print production is that not all blacks are equal, not all printing methods behave the same way, and something that looks perfect on one press may look noticeably different on another.

As designers we don’t need to become printers, but understanding the production process helps us make better decisions. Sometimes the most effective solution isn’t the most visually impressive one, it’s the one that balances appearance, cost, consistency, and ease of reproduction.

That’s why I always encourage designers to learn at least the basics of printing and production. It gives you a much better understanding of why certain design decisions work well in the real world while others can create problems further down the line.


By the way - it’s not impossible to do black cards with reversed out text or gold text, they can look nice. But speak with your print provider and work closely with them for the setup of the actual artwork you’re sending.

Another consideration is to have the reverse as white - people like to write on business cards, maybe an alternative email or phone number, or a colleague detail - you can’t really write on black.

Your cards are nice, but your printer will probably hate you for it.

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This is incredible feedback, seriously, thank you so much. I’m making notes right now on everything you’ve said. If you don’t mind me asking whats your background in design? I’m curious because you you’ve given me so much to work with.

I’m approaching 50 and I’ve been in the print and design business since I was 17. Started as a screen printer, then moved into design in a litho printing company, and bounced around a few places, some publishing, some magazines, some large events (multi-million euro events), and so on. Now I work quietly in a room by myself in bliss.

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That’s so cool, thank you again for taking the time to reply. I’ll make a point to learn what I can with printing and production, and I’ll continue studying the other fundamentals you mentioned. You’ve been very generous with your time so thank you.

I’ll be honest, while the HECHT development type treatment is ok, the monogram IMO is lacking.

First you are trying to shoehorn a roof into the mark which is extremely overused in construction and real estate logos and the curves don’t add anything. It looks unstable as the whole monogram is getting ready to rollover and fall to the right. Also, the odd, angled cuts to the vertical stems of the H also come across as decorative for the sole sake of being decorative.

It looks as if the monogram might be trying to combine an F and a J. I also see an elephant’s head and trunk in the top part of the logo, and a smoking pipe as in Magritte’s “This is Not a Pipe” in the negative space at the bottom.

It also slightly resembles a Seahorse overall.

Did you have other ideas? Anything scribbled out on paper. Perhaps a monogram isn’t even the best approach. Perhaps other symbols abstract or more literal.

Sketching out a good 40 or 50 options and really exploring what the brand is, thinking about what your family member wants to communicate with the logo, what their business represents would be invaluable.

I appreciate the honest feedback.

You’ve sorta caught me here, I do have some other concepts but I only had a weekend to come up with a direction and the roof element was actually added later after my family member suggested it.

Now, I don’t want this to turn into me making excuses, I really appreciate the advice on making more sketches because honestly even with more time I don’t think I would’ve ended up with 40-50. I’ll keep that in mind going forward.

I also appreciate being called out on the more decorative parts of the mark, but I guess my question is how can I tell when something is serving the design versus just being decorative.

Is there a process I could go through to evaluate that?

Apologies for the length:

I promise you it’s a rich tapestry of a mad man. Enjoy.

A lot of people starting out, myself included, let the client dictate the timeline. That doesn’t happen for me anymore. If someone told me on a Friday they wanted concepts by Monday I’d tell them they’ll have them the following Friday as I have other commitments, I know you have a family member and it’s tougher to say no, but it’s still your weekend, and working with family is rarely good anyway.

Don’t get caught in the trap of thinking you owe clients your evenings and weekends. You’re providing a service they can’t do themselves. A rushed timeline rarely produces the best work.

Set your business hours and stick to them. If a client wants work outside those hours, or wants an unrealistic turnaround, that’s not your emergency, that’s theirs. They can either wait, pay a premium for the rush, or find someone else.

It’s your business and your time. Professional clients generally respect professional boundaries. The sooner you learn to manage expectations and timelines, the better both your work and your sanity will be.

The irony is that most clients would rather wait an extra week for a good solution than get a rushed one by Monday.

One thing I’d add regarding the decorative elements question.

A good test is to remove it.

If you take an element away and the logo still communicates exactly the same thing, functions exactly the same way, and arguably looks cleaner, then there’s a good chance it was decorative rather than functional.

If removing it makes the mark weaker, less recognisable, less balanced, less memorable, or removes meaning from the concept, then it’s probably serving a purpose.

For example, the roof shape in your mark. If you remove it and the logo loses its connection to property development, then it’s serving a purpose. If you remove it and the logo becomes cleaner, more stable, and still works perfectly well, then maybe it was unnecessary.

The same goes for the angled cuts. Ask yourself what they are communicating. Do they represent something? Do they improve legibility? Do they create a stronger monogram? Or are they there simply because they look interesting?

Every line, shape, colour and effect should have a reason to exist. If you can’t explain why it’s there, it’s worth questioning whether it should be there at all.

On the monogram itself, I’d also ask whether a monogram is the right solution for the business. Is Hecht already a recognised name? The target market is high-end right? Monograms often work well for luxury brands because they’re associated with tailoring, jewellery, fashion houses and prestige goods.

If you do go down the monogram route, I’d explore it much further. A capital H is essentially two columns connected by a crossbar. For a property developer, those verticals could become architectural elements, pillars, buildings, gateways, or other forms connected to construction and permanence.

The important thing isn’t whether the first idea is right or wrong. It’s whether you’ve explored enough alternatives to know it’s the best idea.

HECHT is also a fish, I just found out. Is a FISH right for the business? Is a BIRD right for the other property development company listed below. Birds are nice, and marlet sounds like it could be a bird, but it probably has a connection to their family crest, so that’s a good connection.

The HECHT family Crest is actually 3 fish

Not very appealing

Here’s an earlier family crest - this one - you can probably indicate some sort of higher level of property with Royalty - Dragons as a motif would be strong and distinctive.

another version here

We’ve got elkstone - terrible logo - nice but terrible
https://www.elkstonepartners.com/real-estate-investment

Cairn - sylised A in shape of roof
https://www.cairnhomes.com

Marlet - some sort of stylised bird but can’t find a marlet bird, there is a mythical Martlet… seems to be Marlet or Martlet and it’s on coat of arms as a mythical creature
https://marlet.ie/

McGrath - some buildings in a honeycomb shape

Ballymore - just a wordmark

All of this is just with about 15 minutes research. Typically I’d spend minimum 4 hours researching and gathering info on what’s good or bad and honing into ideas.

In about 15 minutes I’ve got probably 3 good ideas.

Can I make a column or pillars that you see on fancy mansions out of the H

Can I use a fish - perhaps hidden subtly within the logo, not noticeable at first glance but can it be done tastefully (probably not)
MAYBE this is your rational for the tail - or the hook like thing.

I’ve got a stylised dragon and an arrowhead weapon.

Arrowhead is interesting but more suited to maybe archaeologically or something.


I wouldn’t spend less than half a day researching and gathering imagery and what competitors do and what their logo solution is.

Then I’d concentrate on the name of the company.
What typefaces look good what looks bad. Thin, thick, script, serif, sans serif, what one suits the company, their ethos, do they want modern, old fashioned, cheap looking, high end.

This case it’s high end, we know that.

Luxury logos are a dime a dozen

Luxury Property logos are not
Terrible

Not bad

It’s nice - gives the impression of a castle though - it’s not a location in Ireland…

Montane - not a fan of this one either - looks like a button on a website from the early 2000s


How do you know you’ve got something good - it’s better than the crap that’s out there.
it’s researched
It’s polished
It’s functional
Every stroke and angle is intentional and backed up with an explanation.

@CraigB is right - you need sketches - sketch sketch sketch.

Research - sketch
And keep going keep iterating until you hit the nail on the head.

Speed comes later. Concentrate on accuracy.

Something I used to teach my martial art students, concentrate on accuracy, practice in slow intentional moves, don’t rush it, when you reach a stage that it has become muscle memory then add speed, then each strike on the opponent becomes intentional, delibrate, hits the target as intended, causes maximum damage, and not only that you learn to move quickly to the next strike.

I always taught in a way that was similar to learning to read and write. First you learn to associate images with words, A is for Apple. Then you learn to form the letter A.

One can’t go straight from A is for Apple to writing a Stephen King style novel. It takes practice, intent and patience.

Speed comes later. Concentrate on forming letters, then words, then sentences, then paragraphs then essays - design is no different.

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You have been incredibly helpful. Thank you for taking the time to write all of this out and give me so much advice, business and design-wise.

You’ve expanded my thinking about design to go beyond just testing what looks good and into understanding why decisions are made and how they should all in some way connect back to the business.

As for the process, explaining how you determine what is and isn’t useful, the process of researching, testing, and refining is going to be incredibly helpful for me in the future.

To be honest, I was super nervous posting my work because like I mentioned before I’ve only been seriously studying design for about a month. Part of me was expecting to be told to just give up lol. Instead you’ve given me a road map for what I need to learn next and I’m very grateful for that.

You learn as you go. Its fast moving, the industry changes every few years. When i started it was a 4 year apprenticeship. When i finished it was a 1 year. Digital printing wasn’t a thing. Loads of things.

The stories from my processors are even more harrowing.

The fact you’re receptive says you’ll probably make it.

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