I know very little about Devangari script or what might be appropriate in India. However, to me, here in the US, none of them suggest organic, freshness, vegetables, or fruit. Even the name and the typography, at least in English, is just a combination of stern-looking, bold letters that can’t be pronounced.
As I said, though, what is normal and appropriate in your part of India, I know nothing about. There may be a significant cultural gap that prevents me from fully appreciating what you’ve done.
are you talking about text or colour/font combination? Becasue word AASUD is meaningful in marathi and already registered, please suggest correct colour/background color and font.
By the way with comments from other designers and voting from different i have selected one and modified as shown below, please take a look
Agreed, understand meaning of word is not showing pure,natural and fresh. Here in my country it’s vary famous word AASUD meaning whip, used by farmers.
Also is part of book named Shetkaryancha Aasud by Jyotirao Phule.
I say I am lucky I got domain name and trademark for this name.
Apart from word,how do you feel in font,color,any changes to make it catchy but not disturbing it’s wording. Initially i thought to make AA without horizontal line like how TATA use.
The font in the revised version is more appropriate.
It still don’t think the overall design particularly say “fresh, natural, and pure” to me.
The colors seem a bit muted or, worst case, almost like vegetable and fruit that is going bad. @Joe suggested military. I could see that. I could also see forestry.
As @Joe mentioned, setting the type in a bold, sans-serif, dark green typeface in all caps resembles something the military would use, or perhaps the initials of a bureaucratic government agency.
Have you tried a lighter, fresher green and using a more informal, friendlier typeface set in lowercase (with the first letter capitalized, of course)?
Hi all, making first letter capital and all remaining small is not making it memorable as per offline review i took from different people’ so keeping it as ‘AASUD’ i have made another version as given below
@Eriskay@Smurf2@Just-B@Steve_O@Joe
Thanks you all for your responses.
I have finalized everything except tagline color, could you please suggest me which color combination for tag line is most appealing, readable, and professional.
