Feedback for a fictional personal brand logo.

JunSuzuki
Sun, 10 Aug 2025 03:50:58 +0000
Student Forum

Hey, before we start I just want to say sorry about my amateurish english. It is not my first language.

So I’ve been assigned last Wednesday to make myself a personal brand. It doesn’t affect much my grade but I’d really like to do a good and satisfactory work. I asked my peers how they percieved me, as a “first field search” to see what vibes I give off and mostly the answers were: funny, stylish and and japanese (Yes, that’s how many of them described me, smh).

As you can see I’m going for a boldy look, using my name as it’s main focus (as it should). I think it should have more of a neutral feeling because as the teacher explained, maybe we’d put them logos on our essays and homeworks, so I went with a “gray area” logo so that It’d fit with whatever the theme of the assignments are, such as a more serious one or a more funny/young one.

I think it’s a solid 5/6, and have much room for improvements. So I ask you guys: any suggestions?

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