Above the fold section design for web design

Hi everyone. This is my first post on this forum.

I am a self-taught web developer, mostly doing front-end design, with no design schooling. One thing I always struggle with designing is sections above the fold (the first thing you see on the screen when going to a web page). My natural instinct is to make them full-page designs with nice imagery.

Right now, I am designing one that will be for a catalog release. Below I added a screen shot of what I have so far. To me it seems there is so much white and it looks very plain.

Without revamping the whole thing, what would some of you do to the design to make it look more modern/edgy looking?

Thanks!

I think 3d text might be works here in a good way. And color is nice but you can try it with green instead of red, green and black might be goes with the flows.

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