Graduate portfolio critique

I graduated from visual communications last year and am looking for honest feedback on my portfolio would be much appreciated

https://www.behance.net/gallery/245597127/Portfolio

Welcome to GDF. Here is my take on your portfolio.

It seems like you do nice work, so I hope this won’t come across as too negative. The problem that I am seeing is that the presentation is over-designed. This makes it tough for me to isolate and evaluate the core design work.

Also, learn about hanging punctuation and then re-typeset the page with the “simplicity is the…” quote.

Thank you ! I feel like I have that problem a lot when it comes to presentations I tend to over do it or under do it.

And it’s not negative at all I really appreciate direct constructive criticism.