I am not sure if there are graphic design teachers on this forum or not but I wanted to put this resources out there and see if anyone would review this text and provide me some feedback on how it could be improved.
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I would give feedback, but I don’t want to fill out forums or sign up for any services to do it. It’s too far out of my way, and too much risk of my personal information.
Are you trying to keep part of it secret? Are you expecting secret feedback? Perhaps you can post just the critical parts here.