i like the color scheme, just the entire design seems off.
the top text should be arced and centered with the sun, easy to do in illustrator.
the rope is too big, how would that look under the building?
others see will add printing, cymx and other graphic advice soon,
I wrote a critique, posted it, and realized this wasn’t in the critique section. If you’d like a critique, let me know, and I will repost my thoughts.