Hi guys! I am new in this forum also new to graphical design, just started learing a hald year ago and got online curses for Figma, Photoshop and some basics for CSS and Sass. Purpose is to make layouts for website design and to make it real. I have got my first request to make a landing page for my friend. Please give your evaluation, critics. Will be glad to know, what i am doing wrong.
https://www.figma.com/design/L4xu2eXHJOS6lzRJlBp84p/Coach-blog?node-id=81-746&t=SiuhT7UFvy4DRvUr-1
Thank you 
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Hi Sofico82
I have seen your webpage, very nice!, but may be you need to add “about” at the first part ? also make your information more simple. I would add just some small information and after about then add “services” (what i offer) with the button of “the free session” or may be offer a “first session is free !” (something like that). Also the yellow color (may be i would add something like the sun, just a little bit darker).I wonder if Is this webpage with responsive design ?.
Thank you for advise! Very helpful for me!!! 
No problem, always for help !. Just one thing (last one) and make sure your webpage is responsive design ( i mean that your webpage can be seen by many devices).
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Yes, I know. I have decided to start from general design and after I will adopt to different devises. But thank you 
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