Hiya waynebmore. I’m not sure what you are looking for feedback on. Is this you singing? If so I am not someone who can critique a voice or song lyrics.
Did you write the song? Did you film this? Did you edit this?
Basically I need more info to go on. What exactly is your part in this and what do you want critique on?
Thanks for getting back to me, i directed the video. I filmed it and edited it.