New Challenge

Hey All

I would love to know your opinion on my new uploaded work

It’s a corporate logo in Arabic Typo Called El Banna

  • Color Palette
  • Mock up choice

https://www.behance.net/gallery/69613315/El-BANNA-Public-Accountants-and-Consultants

The English portion is off.

It’s either accountants and consultants or accounting and consulting. The first are titles the second is what they do.

Also:

“Is a corporate for public…” > Is a corporation for public…

Very beautiful work. Your restrained use of color is very nice.

As RKK mentioned, the English has significant errors, which detracts from the work.

Not too bad, nice effort.

good job man