Opinion for a beginner design

Hello,

i started new to do designs by myself without really much practice and i wanted to see how well i am doing with my skills and my uncle has a turkish tailoring in türkiye. I did a advertising poster. in advance i know the logo has low quality (and would need some rework), i just downloaded it from his profile picture. i improvised and i let it trace in illustrator. anyway i just would like to hear your all opinions and any improvements i could need.

The name in the logo means “work uniform”.

Too many words. A poster has to grab attention within 3 or 4 seconds then has to give someone a reason to linger longer.
Think heirarchy.
Emphasize “tailoring.”
You don’t need the extra words under the services.
The lower text is too hard to read over the image

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Yes. I think it shows.

@PrintDriver’s statements are spot-on. Before I can add anything, would you be able to tell us the physical size of this poster?

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To me, a poster is usually a large printed sheet of paper posted on a wall, at a bus stop, or a kiosk. However, I’ve noticed that some people have begun to refer to social media advertisements as posters.

What kind of poster are you referring to?

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