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Interesting spelling of Beach…
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Looks kinda spammy to me…
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This is a horrible poster. Let me list the reasons:
- The obvious even typo. Even if this is a clever way to combine ‘beat’ and ‘beach’, it isn’t working.
- What does Grand Mastic with Friend mean? Is this the headliner’s name?
- Why is there no space between entry and $20?
- There are none of the following: Location, address, venue name, times (doors open & performance time), age restrictions, payment methods (online or at the door), food/drink availability, sponsorship or business affiliations, hashtags/apps/social mentions.
- The lack of creativity with the clip art.
It is a bold move to ask people to contact you for more unique designs. What kind of impression do you think you’re leaving with this caliber of work?
Moved to Student Forum