Since you are new and this is the third image you posted with no explanation as to why I need to ask you what is this for?
If you are wanting a critical review, please post in our Crit Pit
If you let us know what things are for, we will know how to respond.
If you are indeed looking for a critique, we can move this to the Crit Pit for you. I’ve already moved your other posts.
You are doing these in photoshop, aren’t you.
Photoshop is not used to create logos.