Hey Yudhie 
Since you are new and this is the third image you posted with no explanation as to why I need to ask you what is this for?
If you are wanting a critical review, please post in our Crit Pit
If you let us know what things are for, we will know how to respond.
If you are indeed looking for a critique, we can move this to the Crit Pit for you. I’ve already moved your other posts.
Thanks
You are doing these in photoshop, aren’t you.
Photoshop is not used to create logos.