Hello to everyone,
this is my first post on this forum.
First I want to say that I’m beginner in world of graphic design and I’m in process of creating my own/first logo. I have created two versions and don’t know which one to use. Only difference is that second version don’t have that square behind it. I like first one more, but some voice deep inside of me tells me that second is better. Please help lol.
If it were me, I’d thicken up those outlines. Reduce the logo down to typical business card size or, even further to a website favicon, and they’ll get so thin as to be difficult to reproduce or see. Besides, I think it would just look better — especially when you’re in a situation where you only have black to work with and need to print the outlines by themselves.
I do agree the second composition is the best one. It’s simpler, more straight-forward and doesn’t have the background competing with it for attention.