- Outline the pizza.
- It’s hard to read the text with all the doodles behind it - border the text.
- Why are the horns just floating there - place them securely somewhere.
- Something about the doodles - remove some for a little more breathing space.
As mentioned numerous times before, tell us more, or people will stop responding.
I’m going to be honest. If you’re a teenager still in school, your work shows promise due to your considerable creativity. However, it’s obvious that you have no education on how to harness that creativity to produce viable commercial design, as opposed to simply expressing yourself through your art creations.
In other words, you might be a creative teenager with potential, but you completely lack the basics that are needed as a foundation for commercial design.
Tell us more about yourself, your work, and why you arrived at your solutions. Most of us here have decades of experience and are eager to help. Fail to do that, and there’s really no point in responding to you. Sorry.
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This is my first time that I see someone who tries to make a pizza with horns or devil horns, btw the typeface in black does not reflect anything about the “domino effect” even, this is like Domino’s Pizza trying to open a pizza restaurant in Italy. I would change the background with something that make senses not with “anything” and this is VERY IMPORTANT. Do you want to make spicy pizza ?. With this you are going backwards and not forward. You should check other’s designers works and make your own because this way, you look like a children just making doodles.
I am sorry, but I must say something to you this design does not represent even 5% percent a nightclub owner, you should see other examples how nightclubs designs looks like and have a look. Pizza with horns and saying “Domino Effect” would make people to think about spicy pizza and dominos pizzas, and the doodles is just too messy. As I said before, you need to stop doing this random designs and to think to make a mockup (pen and graph paper) then make a prototype design.
If you would answer at least one question of users or react in any way to their comments one could think you are not a bot. Until then …
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I am began to suspect, like you, may this be not a human being but an AI tool testing us ? And even his designs are not “amazing” but weird.
This user is also loukas_anast who was suspended
for consistently posting images without explanation and that make no sense. I knew it all looked and felt too familiar 
They won’t be posting anymore nonsense.
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