This is a remake from an old ads that I made for a test, since I start to study deep more in Gimp I try to remade for see what I could improve. The objective it’s was use this lady for an ads with the summer theme to sell sun glasses, but I don’t know if the background is good enough and the typogr…

What’s the focus of your ad? The girl? The sunglasses? The word Sol? Do some research into how eyes attract a viewer’s attention above all else. I see eyes. I don’t see sunglasses or text. Nope. By adding the sun behind the letters, you have effectively negated the impact of the word by making …

I agree with the technical problems mentioned by PrintDriver, so I won’t repeat them. Aesthetically, there are some nice things in the composition. However… The focus of the composition seems to be the horizontally centered girl who isn’t quite horizontally centered. Instead, she’s awkwardly offse…

Hi there! Thanks for feedback. This is the changes which I made I did more contrast on blue background, @PrintDriver this wasn’t supposed to be an ad to be printed, it’s was made for the internet. I did not follow that tip because I imagine that may happen different on internet. @Just-B I try …

You’ve attempted to address my comments but you’ve made it look worse and still not made it into an ad for an actual product. If you saw an ad showing a pair of generic sunglasses with no mention of the brand or where they could be purchased, would you spend time looking for them? For that matter, …

You’re going backward. Even with all its problems, your first attempt was better. The background is garish and still composed of colors that will surely disappoint you the first time you see it in print. Your background should add subtle texture and/or suggest a location. This does neither. Look at…

B’s ad just makes me want my hair back. :frowning_face:

[image] PrintDriver: B’s ad just makes me want my hair back. LOL! Dude’s got hair to spare.

Oh I got hair to spare… just not up there. (I’m a poet… yeah.)

[image] PrintDriver: B’s ad just makes me want my hair back. I’d still shave my head even if I could still grow a head of thick, nice hair. It’s just to convenient having a shaved head. You get out of the shower, dry off, and you’re done.

[image] HotButton: LOL! Dude’s got hair to spare. Someone as hairy as the guy in the ad would likely have no dividing point between his beard and chest hair, yet no hair is sprouting from beneath his t-shirt. I suspect he’s been altered.

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