Hello again! I appreciate the feedback.
I try to rework in all aspects, following now the @HotButton tips, but of course doesn’t deny others warnings that people advice me. Instead of just a blue gradient without meaning I try to create a texture that would remember beach sand an to reforce this idea I drew a beach towel back from the lady (this test request me use her) and I delet the other glass and I drew a sun, too.
Like it’s was said type for read, then I try to find someone that could be fashion and readable.
