You’ve attempted to address my comments but you’ve made it look worse and still not made it into an ad for an actual product.
If you saw an ad showing a pair of generic sunglasses with no mention of the brand or where they could be purchased, would you spend time looking for them? For that matter, the sunglasses in the upper left aren’t even the same ones the model is wearing.
Here’s an example of an ad that does work. It shows sunglasses. It mentions what brand they are. It mentions a reason to buy them (they’re 50% off because it’s fall and the end of the season). At the bottom, it even mentions where they can be purchased. The ad also bold, looks good and is visually compelling.
