Binggo

The Crit Pit
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#1

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#2

Judging from the looks of it, have you just combined a couple of pieces of clip art?

I think more information is needed to give you any meaningful feedback. What purpose does what you’ve made serve? What were you trying to accomplish? What does a crane or a heron or a stork (or whatever it is) have to do with dice and the word BINGGO? Something to do with gambling, maybe?

#3

Or spelling Bingo wrong?

#4

Just based on your image I would say:

  • BINGGO - the name of the company should be bigger in my opinion especially compared to the size of the other elements. Personally, if you want a dice in the image you could possibly replace the “O” in binggo with it.

  • If you want to go with the bird as the main image I could potentially see it being in a “B” form - the neck the top of the B and the foot being placed on top of the dice as the bottom.

  • The birds left foot need to be fixed looks more like a crab craw then a foot

  • I would use circles for the head and other curves on its body to give it a more professional polish

Cheers

#5

With no introduction, brief or description, you’ve given us very little to go off of. The only clue is that this is posted in the critical pit, so I assume you’re looking for feedback.

A quick reverse image lookup shows that the dice is a pretty generic illustration form (having the leading corner fade out like that) and that the bird is available clip art. Depending on what this is, it could be a big mistake to use canned art. Aside from that, the overall composition and balance are off. SO I’d say back to the drawing board on this one.

#6

And BINGGO was the companies’ name-o!

#7

The company name looks disproportionately small in the logo. Size it down to fit into a business card and see if you can read it.

#8