Card feedback

So I am working on some holiday themed cards this year, and I wanted a bit of feedback on the first one before moving forward. I like the set up I have but I feel something is missing. Thoughts?
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I’m not too crazy about this, sorry. I’d suggest this concept gets scrapped and you work on some other options.

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Before anything is done, work on the kernings.

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