Could I get feedback on my deck design?

Anyone have any critique on the first two designs in my slide deck? Particularly for typography + font pairing and composition. Thanks in advance!

What is the intent of the slide deck?
And what is the subject?
What is the “sell?”
Without details of the brief it’s not possible to have an opinions.

It’s nice, clean and looks good. Unfortunately, the type is so small that it’s also unreadable assuming this will be seen in a typical business meeting setting.

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