I am not set on the logo on the bottom left, but overall, I want to know what your opinions are of this design. Is the balance alright? Does it look decently professional? What should I have done differently? [new2]

What is the purpose of the piece? Who is the target demographic. Without knowing that, there’s no telling if it’s working. Something “looking professional” depends on if it conveys the intended message. Explain why you have all of your elements moving left to right except for the one crashing int…

I like what you’re going for with the deconstructed layout, but I think it’s overdone. Too much happening. As for the logo, it is hard to see the ‘A’. Also it’s too much to have a decorative, a sans serif, and a serif font all in one logo. Simplify. Also, have an idea in the logo. You can do a typo…

You gave some great advice in another thread. How best to apply your own advice to your own work might be something to consider. :thinking: [image] Flyer DeborahR wrote: “Who is this girl? Why is she important? How is she associated? Would your audience know right away? If so, that makes sense, …

Agreed, I need to look at my own designs in a similar matter. Sometimes it takes a second set of eyes that aren’t looking through rose tinted glasses. I really had fun making it, so I have been set on trying to incorporate it in a brand, but unless it is for a magazine clothing brand, I can’t see it…

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Just-B January 2, 2019, 5:07am 5

You gave some great advice in another thread. How best to apply your own advice to your own work might be something to consider.

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