First Attempt - Disjointed Text Critique Wanted

The Crit Pit
#1

I tried pushing myself to do a style challenge to learn new skills, techniques etc. so I started with disjointed text and would like some feedback on them!

Brand - Rhythm Entertainment (RE), a event/concert company - message ‘reliable, honest, trustworthy’

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Big Boy’s Burgers (BBB), a burger company that focuses on a teen audience. Motto ‘go big or go home’
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Decapitated Cupcakes (DC) Clothing brand for youth
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#2

Describe the theory behind this use of text? I’m not sure you understand that part in the execution of this technique.

#3

I think what you’re going for works. I don’t particularly like certain elements, but that could be just personal taste.

#4

Is there an advantage to disjointed text? I suppose it could be design elements, but I wouldn’t count on it to identify anything.

#5

I’m honestly just playing with the concept. I have never tried this style and was practicing on some of my brands. If you are more educated on how to use this, please provide more guidance.

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