Thanks for the feedback, everybody. I’ll be sure to utilise it. In response to a couple of posts:
@chrsgrbr That space on the 2 was annoying to me as well - glad to know I wasn’t just being picky. And agreed on weird split ‘i’ agideas logo. Unfortunately it was supplied for the project and has to be used as is. Also, I love my big comma.
@Biggs That’s totally fair, and I see what you mean. It does have an overly-aggressive feel, like the start of a true crime show or something with the still of the murderer’s face turning to red. As for the photo itself, that was one of the required included documents. And I’m glad to see appreciation for the comma.
@HotButton yep, all the copy was included, as was the image. And I think I agree with you - the original plan was to include some illustration, and in retrospect I probably should have kept with that. Thank you for the feedback!
Thanks again, everybody. Very much appreciate y’all taking the time.