Help with wine bar project 2

Hi Everyone,
I have taken feedback I received previously and am back for v2.
Some of the things I changed are:

  • thickening up the lines on the bird and deleting details, while still trying to make it feel like a woodcut/ lino print.
  • Replacing the flower with grapes to connect more to wine
  • Drawing the foot the right-way-round (oops lol)
  • Showing a simpler logo that will work smaller

I haven’t added colour yet as I wanted to get the budgie sorted first.
After all that I’m not sure where to go, or if I should bin it and go again. I would for sure love some input and fresh perspective, and appreciate everyone who takes their time to leave a comment. 06%20AM

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